A picture is worth a thousand words.
Yes your elements are too close, perhaps a diffuser between them and the panel may help even out the temperature..... but....
Your biggest single problem is NO wicking material. Your aggie hose will do a good job.... right up until the plastic gets a little vacuum.... then it will stick together by the atmospheric pressure, and you can't transfer the vacuum any more.
Place a beach towel or some other thick porous material inside the bag on the cell side. Make sure the aggie pipe is embedded in this... This way, the air can move between the cell backing and the plastic bag... and it will work.
Even if you didn't get the elements far enough away, if it didn't rupture until 35 mins or so, and if you had of had the wicking sheet/blanket/towels in place, you would have gotten a half decent result..... even with not getting the sealing right, it would have yielded a much better result..... bottom line is
you must have wicking material in there to spread the vacuum evenly. It is the single most important thing to getting the vacuum process to begin to work.
You'll know if it is working, as the beach towel will feel almost like a rocky material when the vacuum is pulling it fully on. The pressure is enormous.. more than 13lbs/sq inch (or more than 450lbs per cell) It cannot work without the wick material to spread this about. It needs to be reasonably thick so when it gets crushed, it can still have air sneak through it if need be.
The air pipe input..... if that is where you losing seal, then use a heat gun to soften the plastic bag, and anothe wire tie (different orientation for each one as there is a small gap where the feed through is.
As a test, pull your vacuum on and spray some water around the seams.... and the wire tie area, and see if in fact it is there or somewhere else... the water should seep into the cracks in this case.... showing the flaw in the seal..... place you finger over the hose end to see of there is a leak in the vacuum line. It should take the gauge all the way.
Look at your cells in your top pic, there are air gaps all over the cells even. It cannot work without a medium to move the air. Where the creases are in the plastic, I'll bet there is some movement if you tug at them... with wicking they will be rock hard with no movement, and much thinner in profile.
Your so close now....
................oztules