Damn good start, if you ask me.
Not a lot jumps out at me as design problems. Some "what-if" stuff is all. It's a schematic, not a photo, so I have to ask: Have you actually built it yet?
Eight batteries in parallel is probably the biggest weakness. If one battery begins to fail, then its inability to reach the same voltage as the others will cause it to rob current from the others. One weak battery can kill the others in the parallel bank. It will be necessary to watch the individual cell voltages, especially as they age, by disconnecting them all from the common power supply to the inverter, letting them rest, and looking for differences in resting voltage. I wouldn't rely on specific gravity of the electrolyte alone.
There's another potential problem, but it depends on how you hooked up the common bus wires among the batteries - I won't know without a photo.
There are a thousand other details in every system that could be OK or potential disasters, from connectors, to wire gauges, to grounding, to the condition of the used equipment you have.